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The White Legacy - Gen. 5, Spares

Sorry for the delay! I didn't anticipate just how much work putting this thing together would be! It's done now, though, so I hope you like it!


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biglenny
Jan. 14th, 2014 02:02 pm (UTC)
[Spoiler (click to open)]It’s nice to see what’s going on with the spares and such. Ties things up a bit with their own storylines intertwined with the main one as well.


Personally, I think Neffy’s desire for revenge is making me like her less. On one hand, I sympathize with her as a result of losing her parents at a young age, but on the other hand, she alienated herself from others by thinking that her loss is greater than that of others as a result. I’m glad to see that Zircon managed to smack some sense to her in the end.

I’m very sad to see Cygnus go, especially after he told Jade and Sun about his life and all that they need to know about Arc and Merry. Yet at the same time I’m glad he lived a life well-lived, especially regarding some of his kids having their own kids.

As for Spar, I have this feeling that his path and Neffy’s will collide someday. After all, they’re going after Arc, but for different reasons. This sounds like trouble is brewing already.

I’m curious as to what the vampires are planning. From the looks of it, this doesn’t sound good to me.

For a family tree, I suggest FamilyEcho. It’s flexible and free, though it takes some time to get used to some of its features.

That’s it for my co
mment. Great update, and I look forward to the next one.
keika20
Jan. 14th, 2014 03:30 pm (UTC)
[Spoiler (click to open)]
Yeah, to be honest, I do like my spares. As I have repeatedly stated, though, I'm far more interested in my main line. I don't know what happened this last generation; in generation three I was [reluctantly, or so I said] giving updates on them most every chapter, and then in generation four I suddenly stopped. There are some important storylines going on among them which need to be worked on, so I don't know.

That might be the exact reaction I wanted out of Neffy... but I'm not going to spoil anything I have planned for her little storyline. ^^;

Yeah, those vampires are worrying me. They've got something up their sleeves, and I have a feeling it's not going to be good. ;)

I've been thinking about using FamilyEcho, actually. I've been hesitant, but you know, I think I'll just go do it.

Thanks for reading and commenting!
ext_2461025
Mar. 7th, 2014 12:10 am (UTC)
Thanks for the update! It's so much to keep up with.
keika20
Mar. 7th, 2014 04:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks for keeping on reading!
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