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The White Legacy - Gen. 4, Ch. 3

And I'm back from hiatus! Thanks for holding out for me, and here's a new chapter for you! And just to prove that I didn't waste my time during the last month, here's proof of my achievements. Isn't it pretty?



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biglenny
Dec. 2nd, 2013 12:31 am (UTC)
Congrats on NaNo!

[Spoiler (click to open)]Lol, it’s okay if you want to incorporate spares in the story. I personally like it if their lives are incorporated into the general plot. Kinda makes things more relevant, I think.


Dane grew up adorable, and Hyde as a teen looks nice as well. Not to mention that the latter's little night escapade got me intrigued at Seraphine and who the next heir will be. It looks like something fishy is going on.

ZOMG Baltic’s back! I know he’ll be back someday, and I’m eager to know how he managed to survive like that.


Great update! Can’t wait for the interlude.
keika20
Dec. 3rd, 2013 07:11 pm (UTC)
[Spoiler (click to open)]Thanks! NaNo went a lot faster this year than in the past--I blame the practice I've gotten writing this legacy! ;)

Everybody has a different preferred balance to spares vs. main family, but personally I prefer to have a small amount of spare story and a lot of main family story. Some is certainly good, but I don't like them to overtake the point of the legacy, which is the legacy family. Not that my spares always make that possible... -_-

Dane and Hyde are adorable, aren't they? As for Seraphine... well, I guess we'll find out about her later. ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting, Leonard!


Edited at 2013-12-03 07:12 pm (UTC)
ext_2461025
Mar. 6th, 2014 10:11 pm (UTC)
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
You evil, vicious, cliff-hanger-person, you!
keika20
Mar. 7th, 2014 04:35 pm (UTC)
Re: AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
I have but one thing to say:

>:)
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